Comments on: Chapter 23: The Way She Is http://tdexperience.wordpress.com/2008/08/09/chapter-23-the-way-she-is/ Fashion. Fiction. Flow. Sun, 15 Nov 2009 21:53:15 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Hedge http://tdexperience.wordpress.com/2008/08/09/chapter-23-the-way-she-is/#comment-96 Hedge Tue, 12 Aug 2008 17:55:41 +0000 http://tdexperience.wordpress.com/?p=82#comment-96 "For Ginger, like all young men and women of our generation...." You put in this "our" intentionally, or not? It makes all the difference. “For Ginger, like all young men and women of our generation….”

You put in this “our” intentionally, or not?

It makes all the difference.

]]> By: Lethe http://tdexperience.wordpress.com/2008/08/09/chapter-23-the-way-she-is/#comment-94 Lethe Mon, 11 Aug 2008 03:00:47 +0000 http://tdexperience.wordpress.com/?p=82#comment-94 Your narrative voice comes across strong and in command as you dispense the history of Ginger to your readers. I see Ginger as the yin to the yang of Tom Drake . . . Your narrative voice comes across strong and in command as you dispense the history of Ginger to your readers. I see Ginger as the yin to the yang of Tom Drake . . .

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